寫作任務(wù)

楊利偉是中國(guó)進(jìn)入太空的第一人，是中國(guó)人的驕傲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，以O(shè)ur National Hero-Yang Liwei為題，寫一篇介紹這位宇宙英雄的短文。

提示內(nèi)容：

1.1965年6月21日出生在遼寧省，小時(shí)候夢(mèng)想飛向天空。

2.18歲進(jìn)入大學(xué)，4年后成為飛行員(Pilot)。

1998年成為宇航員。

4.2003年乘坐神舟五號(hào)進(jìn)入太空。

要求：

1.短文應(yīng)包括以上提示內(nèi)容，并能適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

字?jǐn)?shù)：約80。

寫作思路與分析

這次寫作任務(wù)要求寫一篇介紹楊利偉的短文。寫人物介紹類記敘文時(shí)，我們要注意以下事項(xiàng)。

1.我來(lái)介紹一下這個(gè)人物的下一個(gè)情況。

個(gè)人情況(出生日期、出生地、外貌、性格、家庭背景等)；

成長(zhǎng)足跡、教育經(jīng)驗(yàn)、主要成就等。

對(duì)人物的評(píng)價(jià)。

2.人稱：一般使用第三人稱。

3.時(shí)態(tài)：介紹外貌、性格和觀點(diǎn)時(shí)通常使用現(xiàn)在，但介紹過(guò)去的經(jīng)驗(yàn)時(shí)通常要使用過(guò)去。

具體到本習(xí)作，可以按照以下結(jié)構(gòu)使用。

詞匯儲(chǔ)備

外貌說(shuō)明：small mouth、big eyes、round face、large nose、long curly hair、short straight hair、tall and thin和of medium

性質(zhì)或品質(zhì)說(shuō)明：careful、hard-working、kind、helpful、friendly、outgoing、smart、clever、nice、brave

表示pro:pilot、astronaut、teacher、driver、policeman、police woman、clerk、doctor、farmer、worker、

句型聚集

開(kāi)始：

1 .is very famous as a.in the world .

2.in China，there is a famous.called.

3 .is one of the most successful.in.

4.maybe your hero is a famous singer，a movie star or a great man。but my hero seems quite common .

5.do you know the famous.I ' d like to tell you something about him。

主體：

1 .was born in.on.

2 .was born into a rich family .

3.when he was a small boy/young，he was good at/interested in.

4.during his childhood，he lived a happy/hard life。

5.he graduated from.High School/大學(xué).

6.he began to study in.at the age of.

7.he became a teacher/scientist/an actor.when he was.years old .

8.although he.he has a very strong will。

9.where there is a will、there is a way。

10.every one regards him as.

11.He has a heart of gold。

12.whatever he does、he never gives up easily。

13.his hard work brought him great success。

14.his success made a big difference to our life。

15.he is such a nice/friendly/an outgoing/.

That we all love him。

結(jié)束：

1.he has set a very good example for all of us to follow。

2.He's simply the best in my heart！

3.he is the pride of China . we should learn from him。

4.I learn from him that we should never give up，no matter what difficulties we face .

5.wecan make our dreams come true if wework hard like him。

范文展覽

Our national hero

-楊利偉

楊利偉is one of the greatest astronauts in China。楊華遠(yuǎn)《Liaoning on June 21st》，1965年。when he was young，His dream was to fly into the sky like a bird . at the age of 18，yang entered university . four years la ter，His dream came TM

楊利偉is the first person to travel into space in China。being hard-working and brave，he is a true hero。we Chinese people ale