2022年高中入學(xué)考試英語萬能黃金寫作模板

第一部分：敘事敘事

敘事寫作體裁解讀與記譜法

敘事寫作體裁的解讀

事件描述涉及事情的經(jīng)過。這樣的句子等等，對于中學(xué)生來說，大部分都與自己的成長過程、校園生活的點煙回憶、動人的難忘時刻、不屈不撓的奮斗故事、你來找我的人際關(guān)系、以及旅行過程的所見所聞有關(guān)。這些主題要求學(xué)生能夠以自己的視角再現(xiàn)事件，從而以情感為防備導(dǎo)向，身體上大多數(shù)屬于記敘文，有些是集書會的形式，需要通過審議來確定具體類型。

從結(jié)構(gòu)上說，這類文章有規(guī)律，有人情味。一般來說，句子應(yīng)該從3360中間部分開始，重點是事件、記憶等，這部分是重點，語言掌握和培養(yǎng)是決定整個句子等級的主要分?jǐn)?shù)，根據(jù)報紙：最后可以進(jìn)行情感升華，句子結(jié)論應(yīng)該是肯定的。

以大致的結(jié)構(gòu)，記敘文的重點應(yīng)該放在中間敘事部分，要想寫好這部分內(nèi)容，記敘文必須準(zhǔn)確、生動有趣。怎么樣才能準(zhǔn)確明確？最基本的是轉(zhuǎn)移五大要素：who(人物)、when(時間)、where(位置)、what(事件經(jīng)過)、how(感覺)。有了這些基本元素，就有了基本內(nèi)容。怎么樣才能生動有趣？這就需要學(xué)生平日的語言積累和修養(yǎng)發(fā)揮作用，句型豐富，詞匯表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，選擇連接詞和過渡句，使敘述順暢。這樣自然會增加文章色彩。否則，文章只是描述事件的流水賬，枯燥無味。另外，這部分是描述過去發(fā)生的事情，使用時態(tài)時要注意。

中小學(xué)英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，初中階段的內(nèi)容和要求(如“changes and development”、“cultures and customs”、“neighborhood and surroundings”)中提到的基本要素村改造。

敘事標(biāo)記法

寫文章文章文章的時候，我們可以分為以下三部分寫：

1.工作的開始。交代時間、地點、人物、事情的原因等。在這部分寫作中，無需詳細(xì)展開，可以簡單交代，使用“設(shè)置懸念”等寫作手法。

2.事情的經(jīng)過和高潮。詳細(xì)描述事情是如何開始、發(fā)展和達(dá)到高潮的。這部分是以文章為中心的，所以要具體、詳細(xì)地描述事情發(fā)展全過程的細(xì)節(jié)，要盡可能真實、引人入勝。

3.工作的結(jié)束。這部分簡單描述一下就可以了，可以在這部分加上自己得到的啟發(fā)和教訓(xùn)，但不需要詳細(xì)展開，一兩句話就可以了。

第二部分

敘事記敘文萬能框架

I can't(事件)without(人物)。

I remember clearly when I(活動)、I felt(感想)。我的parents(慣例)。they told me that and what I should do was . I was touched and made up my mind

To(決定)。

It is(人物)that。

模板內(nèi)容要點

改編問題

具體敘述事情

呼應(yīng)主題

注意：

模板內(nèi)容可以根據(jù)題目要求和具體情況進(jìn)行取舍。

第三部分

必備詞匯和應(yīng)用句型

必修集錦詞匯

1、敘事順序

首先是First、to begin with、first of all、firstly

Secondly、then、besides、what's more、in addition和moreover

Atlast、last but not least、above all、all in all、to sum up、on the whole、finally最終

2、時間說明。

售后.的.胡

After a short /long time/period在很短或很長時間后

Afterwards之后；然后

As soon as.一個.……。

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from that time on從那時起

immediately立刻;立即

lately最近;近來;不久前

nowadays現(xiàn)在;如今

recently最近

shortly馬上;立刻

since then從那時起

when, while ...的時候

3、地點詞匯

church教堂	tower塔	bridge橋	station車站
dormitory宿含	supermarket超市	shop商店	hospital醫(yī)院
theater劇院	playground操場	cinema電影院	museum博物館

4.動作描寫

go out for a picnic去野餐	have a party舉行聚會	go camping去露營
ride a horse騎馬	Have a walk散步	fly kites放風(fēng)箏
take photos拍照	hurry to..匆忙趕到...	see a doctor看醫(yī)生
set off出發(fā)	watch the match看比賽	climb mountains爬山

5、結(jié)尾詞匯

thanks to多虧	as a result結(jié)果	luckily幸運地
because/ because of因為	at last/ in the end最后	.......

經(jīng)典套用句型

閃亮篇首句

(1) One day / The other day / A couple of days ago while he ....一天/前幾天當(dāng)他正.... ....

(2) it was snowing /raining heavily on Monday /Sunday morning when...星期一/星期天早上，正在下著大雪/雨，....

(3) AII through my junior high school, I couldn't forget..在我整個的初中生涯中，我不能忘記....

(4) Last week, when I was on my way home, something terrible happened.上個星期，當(dāng)我在回家路上的時候，一些糟糕的事情發(fā)生了

(5) The event took place/happened /occurred in the early morning.那件事情發(fā)生在一大早。

出彩篇中句

(1) Without hesitation, I decided to give him a hand.毫不猶豫，我決定幫助

(2)It was my first time to Mount Tai.那是我第一次去泰山。

(3) We spent many hours talking happily我們愉快地交談了幾個小時。

(4) The line of people was endless.人們排成的隊伍看不到盡頭。

精彩篇尾句

(1) r never forget he day when we visited the farm.我將永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記我們參觀農(nóng)場的那一天。

(2) What a pleasant trip!多么愉快的一次旅行啊!

(3) This will be an unforgettable experience. 這將會是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。

(4) I have never seen a comedy like that.我從未看過那樣的喜劇。

(5) 1 had fun at the party tonight. 今晚我在聚會上玩得很愉快。

第四部分

模板范文演練

（吉林）回顧三年的初中生活，父母的教誨與支持始終伴你成長，使你進(jìn)步。那些發(fā)生在你與父母之間的故事，看似平淡卻值得回味與珍藏。請以“The Story of My Progress”為題，寫一篇文章。

要求：1.講述一件發(fā)生在你與父母之間的事情，可適度發(fā)揮。

2.詞數(shù)80字左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與學(xué)校名稱。

The Story of My Progress

萬能模板套用分析

首先，引出話題，點明寫作目的。

其次，敘述具體的故事。

最后，再次點明主題。

滿分范文

The Story of My Progress

I can't make any progress without my parents' help.①

I remember clearly when I didn't pass an exam and made my parents disappointed, I felt so sorry and sad and

even did not want to go home.(句式多變原則，when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，從句和主句中and分別連接兩個謂語。）My parents found me at school and tried to comfort me.They told me that one time of failure did not determine my whole life and what I should do was to overcome every difficulty and try to get a higher score in the next exam. I was touched and made up my mind（短語優(yōu)先原則。）to study even harder.②

It is my parents that help me make great progress.③

你也可以這樣表達(dá)

①I must say that my progress has connected with my parents closely.

②Hearing what they said,I decided to try my best and study even harder.

③Thanks to my parents,I have made great progress.

范文譯文

我進(jìn)步的故事

沒有父母的幫助，我不能取得任何進(jìn)步。

我記得很清楚，當(dāng)我考試不及格，讓父母失望的時候，我覺得非常抱歉又難過，甚至不想回家。爸爸媽媽在學(xué)校里找到了我，并盡力安慰我。他們告訴我，一次失敗并不能決定我的整個人生。我應(yīng)該做的就是克服每一個困難，努力在下次考試中取得更高的分?jǐn)?shù)。我覺得很感動，下決心要更加努力學(xué)習(xí)。

正是我父母幫助我取得了那么大的進(jìn)步。

第五部分

熱點話題滿分?jǐn)⑹掠洈⑽谋乇?/p>

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根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

自律，即自我約束，是自我提升的一種途徑，有助于我們成長，促使我們不斷前行。

某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“自律”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)劄榱嗽鰪娮月梢庾R，你做過什么，以及這樣做給你帶來的好處。

提示詞語: self-disciplined(自律的)，plan，goal，habit，improve

提示問題: What did you do to be self-disciplined?

What benefits have you got from doing so?

Self-discipline plays an important role in our life ________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【寫作思路】

這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份，用英語寫一篇短文給某網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)劄榱嗽鰪娮月梢庾R，你做過什么，以及這樣做給你帶來的好處。根據(jù)題目中給出的問題可知，短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先談一談為了增強自律意識，你做過什么？然后談?wù)勥@樣做給你帶來的好處。第一個內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要使用一般過去時；第二個內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要使用現(xiàn)在完成時。注意謂語動詞的正確形式。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)聯(lián)系自己的實際生活，展開合理的想象，將這些內(nèi)容補充完整后，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，這是寫作中的一個難點。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先注意內(nèi)容的完整、充實，學(xué)生們可以結(jié)合自己的實際生活，寫一寫自己平時的做法。注意敘述應(yīng)有層次、有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達(dá)問題，英語句式的結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語是不同的，因此不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)該從句式的整體考慮，先確定主干結(jié)構(gòu)，然后添加修飾成分。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)注意使用一些高級詞匯、短語以及復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意上下連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【參考范文】

Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the society，I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.

In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.

【名師點評】

這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了自己第自律的認(rèn)識，結(jié)合自己的實際談?wù)摿俗月傻暮锰?。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整、充實，短文主要分兩段：第一段中作者介紹了自己在家里、在學(xué)校以及在社會上是如何遵守規(guī)則，進(jìn)行自我約束的。這一段的內(nèi)容敘述很有條理，從at school, At home, In the society三個方面進(jìn)行介紹。第二段中作者主要闡述了自律給自己帶來的好處，使用了Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly，從三個方面進(jìn)行介紹。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，且使用了較高級的詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升了作文檔次，展現(xiàn)了作者扎實的寫作功底。文章中較好的句型有：I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school.、I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal.、First of all，I have had many good habits，which makes my life easier and more regular.、Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future.等。

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假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Mike得知你們開展了“做生態(tài)小公民，建設(shè)美麗家鄉(xiāng)”的活動，他來信表示很感興趣并想了解具體細(xì)節(jié)，請給Mike寫一封回信向他描述你（們）曾經(jīng)做過的一件事或參與的一次活動。

要求：

(1) 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括活動或事件的時間、地點、過程和你的感受；

(2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；詞數(shù)80~100。開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Milk,

I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological eitizen(生態(tài)公民), we did a good job. Last ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【寫作思路】

在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題。

【參考范文】

Dear Mike,

I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they also knew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day.

Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【名師點評】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。

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運動塑造健康，團(tuán)結(jié)凝聚力量。5月10 日，學(xué)校舉辦了春季運動會。你和班上的許多同學(xué)參加了比賽項目，戰(zhàn)績顯著。其他同學(xué)觀看了比賽，并為選手們加油喝彩。請你根據(jù)下面四幅圖片的提示，寫一篇日記，介紹運動會概況及班上同學(xué)參加的情況，并抒發(fā)自己的活動感受。

寫作要求：

1．文章中勿出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；

2．文章須包含圖片所提供的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文連貫，條理清晰；

3．詞數(shù)80~100個，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

參考詞匯：teamwork

Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny

It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【寫作思路】

這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)圖片中的相關(guān)內(nèi)容介紹一下運動會概況及班上同學(xué)參加的情況，并抒發(fā)自己的活動感受。所提供的卡片中列舉了跳遠(yuǎn)、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要從同學(xué)們的參加情況和自己的活動感受這個方面去寫。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意日記中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【參考范文】

Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny

It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race.

Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.

Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.

【名師點評】

【高分句型一】

Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我們班的每個人都很興奮，因為我們?nèi)〉昧艘粋€很好的成績。句子because we got a wonderful result.是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. 我的同學(xué)袁穎和方丹輕松地獲得了女子跳遠(yuǎn)和跳高的冠軍。我也參加了男子100米賽跑。So did I in the boys'100-meter race.是由so引起的倒裝句。

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文娛、體育、戶外等豐富多彩的課外活動為我們的生活增添了生機和活力。請以“After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful”為題，為校園專欄寫一篇英文稿件。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 簡要描述你參加過的一項課外活動；

2. 該課外活動給你帶來的收獲及感受(交朋友；放松自我)。

寫作要求：

1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)；

2. 文章不得出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校名稱與姓名。

After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful

Nowadays after-class activities are becoming more and more important ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【寫作思路】

這是一篇話題作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful的英文稿件，并鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來。寫作需要用第一人稱，注意各種時態(tài)的交替運用。內(nèi)容要點包括：簡要描述你參加過的一項課外活動，時態(tài)用一般過去時；你參加過的課外活動給你帶來的收獲和感受，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主和一般將來時為主；最后總結(jié)自己的心得體會。

【參考范文】

After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful

Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.

In the volleyball club, I've made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.

All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.

【名師點評】

【高分句型一】I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我習(xí)慣放學(xué)后打排球。be used to doing sth.習(xí)慣于做某事。

【高分句型二】And it is also a good way to relax myself. 這也是放松自己的好方法。動詞不定式to relax myself用作后置定語。

【高分句型三】All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 總之，課外活動使我的生活更加豐富多彩，更有意義。more colorful and meaningful用作my life的賓語補足語。

05

假如你有機會和任何一個名人共進(jìn)午餐。請根據(jù)以下要點和要求用英語寫一篇短文。

1. 要點：

1）這個名人是誰；

2）你為什么想和他或她共進(jìn)午餐；

3）你想和他或她談?wù)撌裁础?/p>

2.要求：

1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2）詞數(shù)80左右。

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【寫作思路】

這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你想和哪位名人共進(jìn)午餐。主要從1）這個名人是誰；2）你為什么想和他或她共進(jìn)午餐；3）你想和他或她談?wù)撌裁础＿@三個方面去介紹。注意時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時。人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【參考范文】

I’d like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.

Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today.

I’m expecting this lunch already.

【名師點評】

【高分句型一】

Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. 任先生被認(rèn)為是一個偉大的人，他總是把一切都安排在前面。

句子who always has everything mapped out ahead.是由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

【高分句型二】

If time permits, I'll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果時間允許的話，我今天就為我們青少年征求他的意見。

句子If time permits是由if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。

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初中生活，精彩紛呈?；厥走^去你是否感到充實和快樂，展望未來你是否對高中生活充滿期待，請結(jié)合以下提示談?wù)勀愕母形颉?/p>

提示：1. 初中階段你有哪些收獲；

2. 初中階段你有哪些遺憾或未實現(xiàn)的愿望；

3. 你對未來的高中生活有哪些計劃或打算。

要求：1. 80-100詞，首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清晰。

The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【寫作思路】

初中生活，精彩紛呈。回首過去你是否感到充實和快樂，展望未來你是否對高中生活充滿期待，請結(jié)合以下提示談?wù)勀愕母形?，動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

【參考范文】

The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.

However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.

In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.

【名師點評】

這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I've also made some good friends.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

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"你養(yǎng)我長大，我陪你變老。"父母親一直在為我們的成長默默付出，成長要學(xué)會感受愛、回報愛。今天你即將畢業(yè)是向父母表達(dá)感激的好機會。請根據(jù)以下所給要點，寫一篇英語短文。

要點：

（1）給我生命，一直照顧我成長；

（2）努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件；

（3）擁有愛心，教我學(xué)會……；

（4）今天，我要為你們……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點）。

注意事項：

（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名等信息。

You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth.

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【參考范文】

You bring me up．I will be with you in your life．You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（給我生命，一直照顧我成長） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（擁有愛心，教我做慈愛的人）

Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要為父母做的兩件事）

I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!

【名師點評】

【高分句型一】

When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．當(dāng)我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活有問題時，你總是耐心地幫助我，鼓勵我．

when當(dāng)……時候，引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，adj +enough +to do sth 足夠地……可以做某事，

【高分句型二】

It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教會我做一個善良的人．

本句使用了強調(diào)句It is +被強調(diào)部分+that/who ...

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