我的ideal job

Directions: For this part，You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic : my ideal job . You should write no less than 120 whan

1.人們對(duì)職業(yè)各有不同的理想。

我理想的工作是什么？

3.我打算怎么準(zhǔn)備我理想的工作？

remember to write your composition neatly。

[范文]

我的idel工作

when we are asked about what we want to be in the future、we have different answers . we may want to be a doctor、a lawyer、a politician、

我的ideal job is to be an excellent teacher . this idea came into beingwhen I was very young . no one is born with knowledge . if I am a teacher。I will be able to turn an ignorant man into a learnedperson . I will teach what I know to my students . some times，I will be able to learn something fromso life will be interesting and meaningful.

bu I know it isn ' t easy for me to be a good teacher . being a teacher needs knowledge，patience ，skills，etc.first，I must study very

So，you see，Different jobs require Different talents . I will study hard now at college and get my self well prepared for my future teaching jojo

[注釋]

ideal:理想

come into being:生成

learned:學(xué)過的

創(chuàng)意：創(chuàng)造性

梅寧福：有意義

帕蒂安斯：耐心

魯?shù)拢簾o禮

live up to:不要失敗。體面地滿足要求.

[評(píng)論]

這篇文章是根據(jù)漢語大綱展開的議論文。這種題型作文在最近幾年的大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)。

文章第一段泛提人對(duì)職業(yè)有著不同的理想。第二段詳細(xì)講述作者本人的理想以及實(shí)現(xiàn)這一理想的意義。第三段實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)理想不容易，需要付出很多努力。作者用列舉的方法陳述這些努力。這些枚舉術(shù)語被恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂?，如First、second和Third。最后一段總結(jié)了上述內(nèi)容。

整個(gè)句子結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)格，轉(zhuǎn)換自然，詞匯恰當(dāng)，閱讀非常流暢。

參考文獻(xiàn)：英語作文高分必須背叢書：《大學(xué)英語四級(jí)作文/梨花傳》主編，武漢大學(xué)出版社，2005年。