[CET-6段第一句作文] Hobbies

directions : for this part，You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic given below . You are given the Fe

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1.a hobby is an interesting pursuit，not a main occupation。

2.different people have different hobbies。

3.there are many advantages of having a hobby。

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A hobby is an interesting pursuit 1，not a main occupation . we take up a hobby merely as a pastime at our leisure。it serves as a relaxation

different people have different hobbies . somelike collecting stamps . it is an interesting and instructive hobby，F(xiàn)or many stamps provide us with。

there are many advantages of having a hobby . hobbies add pleasure to life . they fill our vacant hourswith interest，So we are not likely to fall intowe need an occupation of some kind to keep us busy at our old age，After we have earned our retirement . without any hobby，we would feel bored.the

[注釋]

追求pursuit:

at our leisure:空閑的時候

strenuous:辛苦

pertaining to:是

energetic:充滿活力

vacant hours:空閑時間

idleness:空閑

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這是根據(jù)段落第一句展開的說明文。

全文每段都圍繞主題句加以闡述，有繁有簡，詳略得當(dāng)。首段交待hobby是一種有趣的消遣方式。它能使我們的大腦在緊張的勞動之后得到放松。接下來，作者用舉例法說明不同的人有著不同的愛好。有的人喜愛集郵，從郵票中獲得多種知識；有的人喜歡體育運動，通過運動強身健體。最后一段介紹了業(yè)余愛好帶給人們的好處：它為我們的生活增添歡樂和情趣，使我們的生活不再空虛。

這篇文章共分三段，各有側(cè)重，緊扣hobby這一主題，形成一個有機的整體。生動具體的例子使文章讀來令人興致盎然。

資料來源：新大學(xué)英語四、六級考點透視叢書：六級寫作/李華田主編，武漢大學(xué)出版社，2006