提到英語作文，很多同學寫不了筆，總是“信手拈來”，沒有計劃。這樣做的結(jié)果是，作文章節(jié)結(jié)構(gòu)不明確，內(nèi)容選擇離題，會影響作文的整體分數(shù)。今天為了幫助大家解決這個難題，我?guī)砹擞⒄Z寫作思維導圖。請允許我以后寫作文，下次我會得滿分的！

寫文章時要考慮哪些方面的因素？

(1)本主題所需的詞匯、短語。(2)本課題的寫作模板結(jié)構(gòu)等。(3)與該主題相關的經(jīng)典名句、諺語等。

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困惑與對策

困惑1:寫什么？

想以《How to learn well?》為題寫一篇作文，該怎么開始？看下面幾張思維導圖有助于整理一篇作文的寫作框架。

困惑2:如何選擇材料？

雖然知道寫作框架，但在完善框架時，還會出現(xiàn)另一個困惑。如何選擇材料？以下是一些關于寫作選擇的建議。

1.選擇英語思維導圖各地區(qū)所需的詞匯塊和積木。2.把各地區(qū)的詞塊和短語逐段用連貫的語篇寫出來。3.為了準備思維導圖本身的修改，請注意正確使用人稱時態(tài)語氣句型結(jié)構(gòu)。

困惑3:怎么表達？

很多學生寫文章時使用的句子比較單一，所以文章大部分都差不多，個性不足。為了解決這些問題，可以從以下方面進行改進：

1.對于同樣的意思，注意不同句子的表達方法，選擇更好的句子。2.寫短文，表達有力，生動，豐富，努力避免重復使用同一個句子。3.請?zhí)貏e注意使用升騰的單詞和句子。

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思維導圖在英語寫作中的應用實例

寫作過程：1。沈帝，整理思維：考慮寫什么(選擇關鍵詞，構(gòu)建寫作框架)。2.單詞選擇：根據(jù)話題和作文框架選擇所需的語料(詞塊和詞塊)。3.派詞造句：根據(jù)思維導圖的語料，以適當?shù)木湫蛯懽鳌?.最后確定語篇：根據(jù)思維導圖修改潤色作文——，一定要符合主題，表達準確，自然，語篇流暢。

示例1:

如果你參加上周二學校組織的英語演講比賽，有兩位同學——芳芳和明，他們的不同表現(xiàn)會給你留下深刻印象。(大衛(wèi)亞設，Northern Exposure(美國電視新聞))請根據(jù)下面列表中的各項內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文。

參考詞匯：英語演講比賽英語語音內(nèi)容

要求：1 .字數(shù)：80-100個2

last Tuesday Fangfang and mingming entered the English speech contest in our school . what they did make me think dee the contest，F(xiàn)angfang the

范文1

last Tuesday Fangfang and mingming entered the English speech contest in our school . what they did make me think deply。

Before the contest，F(xiàn)angfang thought her English was

the best. So shespent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result, she didn t do well in the contest because she hadn t got ready for the contest.

　　But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at Englishand asked others for help. Especially, his leg was hurt two days before the contest, but he never gave up. In the end, he won the contest.

　　No doubt, from Mingming we should learn : No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush learn fromMingming.

　　范文2

　　Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

　　Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, and that she didn t need to spend more time on the contest at all. She alwaysconsidered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave up.

　　In the end, Fangfang didn t get ready well enough. At the contest, she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because of his efforts.

　　In my opinion, we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.

　　范文3

　　Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

　　Before the contest, Fangfang thought that she was good at English. So it wasn t necessary to spend lots of time preparing for the contest. What she only thought was what clothes should wear, which make herself more beautiful at the contest. At last, she was too nervous to finish the contestbecause she didn t get ready very well.

　　Instead, Mingming had been working at English and asking others for help. What s more, he had hurt his leg two days before the contest. But he had never given up. As the result, he won the contest.

　　I think we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and never give up.

　　?實例2：

　　生活是豐富多彩的，沒有愛好的人生是不完整的人生。親愛的同學，在生活中，你有什么興趣愛好嗎?這個興趣愛好是怎樣培養(yǎng)起來的?它給你的生活增添了哪些色彩?請你以 “My Hobby”為題，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文。(詞數(shù)80個左右)

　　要求：1.語句通順，合乎邏輯，書寫規(guī)范。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱。

　　范文1

　　Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl.From then on I became interested in reading books.

　　Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems for me.

　　In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.

　　范文2

　　My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema, I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It was so creative that it made me enjoy a lot. From then on, I became a movie fan.

　　Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too. On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed. On the other hand, I can learn lots of knowledge from movies.