第四階段情景提示寫作：fast economic growth-gains or losses？

Direction : for this part，You ' re allowed thirty minutes to write a composition entitled " fast economic growth-gains or

經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展歷來(lái)是發(fā)展中國(guó)家的人們期待和做的。然而，這種發(fā)展態(tài)勢(shì)在給人們帶來(lái)利益的同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)就這個(gè)問(wèn)題發(fā)表自己的意見。

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fast economic growth-gains or losses？

there is much discussion today about whether fast economic growth is desirable . and people ' s views on it are varied。

those who criticize economic growth Argue that we must slow down . they believe that our society is approachingcertain limits on growth . they The Fifi

there is certainly some truth on both sides，yet neither provides a satis factory answer。to my mind，Economic growth should meet the needs of the present without compromisingthe ability of future generations to meet their own needsin China，Both the economic development and the protection of natural resources need granting equal priority to。as such is the case，sustainable development

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approach:接近；接近

修改：固定

工業(yè)化：工業(yè)化

compromise:妥協(xié)；危害損失

馬羅：骨髓；要點(diǎn)；要點(diǎn)。精華

可持續(xù)發(fā)展：可持續(xù)發(fā)展

[評(píng)論]

這篇文章是根據(jù)情景提示展開的三段議論文。全文圍繞著經(jīng)濟(jì)快速發(fā)展的利弊展開。

第一段是總論，指出人們對(duì)這個(gè)中心問(wèn)題的意見各不相同，仁者見仁，智者見智。第二段簡(jiǎn)述正反兩方面兩個(gè)完全對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)，對(duì)他們分別進(jìn)行論證，兩方面的論證都比較短，但擊中要害，使讀者不一致，無(wú)法作出決定。(威廉莎士比亞，泰姆派斯特，著)然后作者在第三段通過(guò)Thereis Certain Some TRUTH on BOTH SIDES，YET NEITHER PROVIDES A SATISFACTORY ANSWER順利過(guò)渡32

專業(yè)脈絡(luò)清晰，層次分明，總分-總的結(jié)構(gòu)有助于讀者理解。觀點(diǎn)鮮明，有道理，有根據(jù)，道理透徹，最終結(jié)論更加切中要害，不僅反映了作家有較好的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言功底，也反映了作家有較廣泛的社會(huì)知識(shí)。

參考文獻(xiàn)：英語(yǔ)作文高分必須背叢書：《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文/梨花傳》主編，武漢大學(xué)出版社，2005年。