enhance awareness to guard against campus thefts

1.校園盜竊案時有發(fā)生

2.東西被偷的原因

學(xué)生如何加強防盜意識

沈帝概述

這是一篇論述校園物品失竊和防盜意識的文章。第一段主要陳述校園盜竊案發(fā)生的情況。第二段主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。第三段主要說明學(xué)生如何加強防盜意識。

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enhance awareness to guard against campus thefts

" if you don ' t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear，you ' d better put them on in sleep " goes a popular joke among studes Campus

what makes students the easy targets？The reasons are not hard to find . but I believe of all these reasons，The lack of anti-theft alertness is The most important . for lack The students The

in order to minimize possible losses，The students must stay on guard in The first place，As awareness of The thefts around often makes a big digin addition，it ' s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch

第一個想法評論：描述校園盜竊案發(fā)生的情況。

語言點提示：it seems that這個句型代表可能性

回顧事故的第二段：說明盜竊的原因。

語言點提示：

(1)what makes students the easy targets？這篇文章引用如下

(2)防theft alertness防盜識別

(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

(4)光手指小偷。

回顧第三段思想：說明如何加強防盜意識。

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◇語言點提示：注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞語in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。

How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

1. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活

2. 很多人開始感覺離開網(wǎng)絡(luò)寸步難行

3. 你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴癥的看法

● 審題概述●

本文是一篇論述你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活關(guān)系的文章。第一段，側(cè)重簡述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們生活的多彩、便利。第二段，詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密度。第三段，論述對網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴的觀點。

【范文一】

How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.

◇第一段思路點評：綜述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們生活帶來的多彩和便捷。兩個長句足矣。第一句用if引導(dǎo)的條件句引出“網(wǎng)絡(luò)”話題，第二句概述網(wǎng)絡(luò)帶給多彩和便捷的生活。

◇語言點提示：

has drawn…, realized, and provided此為謂語連動式的運用。

◇第二段思路點評：詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密關(guān)系，先總述，后分述。

◇語言點提示：

resort to借助、訴諸、求助于

◇第三段思路點評：先陳述人們對網(wǎng)絡(luò)的依賴，再談對此的看法。

◇語言點提示：

（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用

（2）addicts成癮者、依戀者

（3）fantasy world虛擬世界、虛幻世界

（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品

（5）fraud欺騙、詐騙

【范文二】

As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.
As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”

Craze for Civil Service Examinations
　

1. 現(xiàn)在有越來越多的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生報考公務(wù)員

2. 引起此現(xiàn)象的原因

3. 你的看法

● 審題概述●
　　本文是一篇主要論述大學(xué)生報考公務(wù)員增多的原因和對此看法的文章。第一段，主要綜述大學(xué)生報考公務(wù)員增多的現(xiàn)象。第二段，側(cè)重分析引起此現(xiàn)象的原因。第三段，重點談你對此的觀點。

　　【范文】

　　Craze for Civil Service Examinations

　　Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.
　　In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.
　　Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.

◇第一段思路點評：第一句總述人們蜂擁參加公務(wù)員招考，第二句點明大學(xué)生是其中的主力軍，第三句再述熱衷于公務(wù)員報考的大學(xué)生不僅有文科的，還有理工科的。

◇語言點提示：

liberal arts majors文科專業(yè)學(xué)生

◇第二段思路點評：先總述引起大學(xué)生熱衷報考公務(wù)員的兩點因素，再詳細(xì)分述。

◇語言點提示：

（1）On the one hand…On the other起到銜接上文作用

（2）is attributable to歸因于

（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界經(jīng)濟(jì)

◇第三段思路點評：重點談對大學(xué)生熱衷報考公務(wù)員的觀點。

◇語言點提示：beyond reproach無可厚非來源:考試大-英語四級

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